The Novelty of a NovelOh, but what to do with it?! It's been sitting here in my house for such a long time, and needs to be critiqued!
Hmm indeed.
Emergence: C2 - The StrangerEmergence by Bill RobsonEmergence: C2 - The Stranger
Chapter 2
The Stranger
OF MAN'S LIFE, HIS TIME IS BUT A POINT, HIS EXISTENCE A FLUX, HIS SENSATION CLOUDED, HIS BODY'S ENTIRE COMPOSITION CORRUPTIBLE, HIS VITAL SPIRIT AN EDDY OF BREATH, HIS FAME UNCERTAIN.
The Stranger viewed the air base as he crossed the runway. It was an eerie sight for a newcomer. A silent vapor arose from several buildings. It then dropped and rolled along the ground, suspended momentarily as the Arctic cold squeezed out its moisture creating an ice fog. A village or town here? he q
Emergence: C1 - ThuleEmergence by Bill RobsonEmergence: C1 - Thule
Chapter 1
Thule
It was backbreaking work using a pick axe to break through permafrost, raising the axe high, swinging hard, then clank, a flew chips fly off. Now after three days of digging, they were close to their goal. They moved the body from its frozen tomb, studied it quickly, then put it back as they found it. The work site was covered with a large red tent that offered little protection from the climate. Around it were four smaller red tents. &
MartyrWhen you feel like the earth's only martyr, when all hope has fled into the night, when you feel you can't go any farther, I will keep you close, and hold you tight.Martyr
When no one can understand, when it's coming to a bitter end, when it hasn't gone as planned, I'll be there, always your friend.
I can promise you all this, and I don't want anything returned, because helping others is bliss, because justice is what you've earned.
I just hope you never lose the sense to simply do what's right, and after all the suspense, I'll give you yo
Eye Catching GoodbyesOh how stunning, something I might not see twice, and alas, my tears are running. But your looks do more than suffice Someone like you I wish I could hold, someone I'll always seek. But I'll only watch till I've grown old, 'tis why I'm so meek. The players of this wicked game I can only sit back and be jealous while they live lives of fame But to fight, and be zealous maybe I'll catch her eye, maybe I can stop hiding, but I cannot stop deciding, on why my love for her has died.Eye Catching Goodbyes
Gordon FreemanJack's DreamJack is tired, very tired He imagines that the world is wired And he thinks of his painting that his mom admired As he rests his tired eyes.Jack's Dream
So Jackie wades in the sea of sleep Crashing waves so tall and deep But in fear he’ll never weep ‘Cause his heart knows no lies
Jack meets all the memories that he used to remember And he hums a song about December And his star fades like a dying ember But Jack will walk for miles and miles.
But Jackie’s dream is crushed and torn It shudders like a sea of corn So Jackie tries to stop and morn Al
To ----Hello, Goodbye, A universe contained in two words, With infinite distances stretched point to point, Love, Romance, Tears, Death, All simply pigments on the palate of time, The greenest green, The most earthen brown, All but shadows of the canvas's glory. Of the dots of fire, That inhabit the sky, Let the years come, As people try to comprehend them.To ----
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